Hi. I am not getting much of any human activity on here. Which is a little disappointing for me, as the authoress of these stories. That, and I'm a little brain dead as to how this story will end up. So, you guys get to pick which of my endings you want, and I will think about your input, and then we shall see what I end up doing when this story reaches its end.
1. Vivite lives through the war (see the preview of Seli'une if you have no idea what I am talking about) and get's to go around free without the government breathing down her back
2. Vivite lives through the war and lives happily ever after with her friends and/or a love interest
3. She is captured and lives
4. She is captured and dies
5. Her life really doesn't get much better or worse, and the plot just kind of becomes a flat line
6. Other: leave your suggested ending in the comments
So, please help me. Or, if I come up with a brilliant idea, I will use it. But this will help me either way.
With best regards and wishes of creative minds,
~I
It seems to me that the beginning of the story, and the last six years of Vivite's life need to be developed more. Perhaps in a flashback, now the she is all ready living with Silver and friends ...so you will have to have many more chapters.
ReplyDeleteYes, I will, I'm working on it. Thank you for the idea!
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